Response to Partner on cultural borders and identity.

Response to Partner on cultural borders and identity.

Step 4: Once you are done commenting, go onto the next page (add a new page to the writer’s essay) and answer the following questions:

  1. Does the writer begin with a story? Is it an effective story? What details could the writer add to it?
  2. Does the writer have a clear thesis that makes some kind of argument about cultural borders and the way they help shape our identities?
  3. Does the writer have three main claims or points?
  4. Is each of the main claim or point supported by either personal experiences and/or cited sources (from class or from the writer’s own research)? Is the support effective/convincing? Are there places where better support is needed?
  5. Does the writer have a conclude the script in a way that leaves you thinking/gives you a sense of finality?
  6. What would you say are the talk’s greatest strengths? What did the writer do particularly well?
  7. What should the writer focus on most as they revise the the script? What can be most improved?

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